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lernen in clas.
were short sentence?
were short sentence uesis onle 5 werds.
The boltong is tasti god
The boltong is were hot
W- start sentence?
W- start sentence ueses w werds lik
when,where.
When is the boltong rede
Where is the boltong?
Adverb start?
Adverb start is lik
sadly,haply
The boltong is,sadly ror met.
Haply,I at my boltong.
Hi Sidney
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your science sentences to your blog. I know you were working hard on these, and I can see evidence you used spell check or asked for help with your spelling. This is a nice improvement :)
Remember, W-starts do not need to be questions. For example, When is the biltong ready? would be more powerful as a W-start like this: When the biltong is ready, ________________ and you fill in what will happen.
Hope that feedback makes sense!
- Miss Birtch
Hi Sidney, It is great to see your work! You have obviously tried really hard with this. I know you were really keen to show us all how to make Biltong! It would be great to see some of what you are doing at home at the moment posted to your blog. Im going to put a few ideas up on my blog of things i am doing so hopefully you find some ideas to keep you busy! Keep in touch, Mark.
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